"Words are timeless. You should utter them or write them with a knowledge of their timelessness."
— Khalil Gibran
short and powerful.
It does seem that life doesn't want to slow down, the older we get...we have to hold on tighter!
I feel the changes in your poem.well done.
hmm. wonderfully crafted debra. life slows down after awhile. here's my rally.. https://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/
Short and sweet, lovely poem!
powerful words... lovely piece!
Thank you for stopping by. Have a write kind of day!