Thursday, October 18, 2012

Life As It Goes

 

As dusty days go past
the summer of youth does not last
it passes by in a blink
as life begins to sink...

7 comments:

Helen Rice Obama said...

short and powerful.

Karen S. said...

It does seem that life doesn't want to slow down, the older we get...we have to hold on tighter!

Demi Jacaranda Henneberry said...

I feel the changes in your poem.

well done.

fiveloaf said...

hmm. wonderfully crafted debra. life slows down after awhile. here's my rally.. https://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/

Lexi Woods said...

lovely.

b3tterthisway28 said...

Short and sweet, lovely poem!

Bing Yap said...

powerful words... lovely piece!

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